Your assistance appreciated!

podzol · 2006-12-16, 11:26 PM

Hi Folks,
I am writing a story. I hope to eventuallypublish it. My target audience is ecologically-minded young adults and adults.

I am looking or volunteer readers to look at passages. I only know soil scientists, so your opinions as unicyclists would be valuable, even though there are no unicycles in the story.

Sorry.

The story is about adventures that some microscopic soil animals have. It's strange, but fun so far.

I don't want to post it on line, because that is essentially publishing it. If you would be interested in reading passages and giving me good AND BAD feedback, PM me your email address!

Thanks!
Blake

carsonpalooza · 2006-12-17, 12:03 AM

How long are the passages?

podzol · 2006-12-17, 12:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by carsonpalooza

How long are the passages?

Not long, about 2-3 single spaced pages.

I am just starting, so I want to get a solid hold on the tone and vocabulary that are acceptable and interesting

carsonpalooza · 2006-12-17, 12:29 AM

sure I'll read some, check your pm.

burjzyntski · 2006-12-17, 02:25 AM

check your PMs again.

podzol · 2006-12-17, 02:47 AM

Hey folks,
Thanks for the interest, keep it coming!

I will have the first chapter to you tomorrow. I look forward to your comments!

Blake

burjzyntski · 2006-12-17, 03:16 AM

I look forward to your chapter.

tumblebug rollin · 2006-12-17, 03:23 AM

I think you already have my address in your PM. I'm an omniverous reader. Skills as critic yet to be determined, but would be interested in the project.

habbywall · 2006-12-17, 04:00 AM

Are you gonna PM us back? Or should I just be confident that you got my PM?

podzol · 2006-12-17, 12:17 PM

Thanks everyone, your suggestions will really help. I knew that I'd find help among you folks!

Quote:

Originally Posted by habbywall

Are you gonna PM us back? Or should I just be confident that you got my PM?

I got your PM, Habbywall, Thank you. You'll hear from me today. I'll email you in a few hours.Hope you like it~

B

2006-12-16, 11:26 PM	#1
podzol "Not I," said the duck. Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Rhizosphere Age: 45 Posts: 1,755	Your assistance appreciated! Hi Folks, I am writing a story. I hope to eventuallypublish it. My target audience is ecologically-minded young adults and adults. I am looking or volunteer readers to look at passages. I only know soil scientists, so your opinions as unicyclists would be valuable, even though there are no unicycles in the story. Sorry. The story is about adventures that some microscopic soil animals have. It's strange, but fun so far. I don't want to post it on line, because that is essentially publishing it. If you would be interested in reading passages and giving me good AND BAD feedback, PM me your email address! Thanks! Blake __________________ http://www.frogballsjuggling.com Last edited by podzol; 2006-12-16 at 11:27 PM.

2006-12-17, 12:03 AM	#2
carsonpalooza Registered User Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Representing North Carolina Posts: 807	How long are the passages? __________________ Carson, MR addict Do you ever get the feeling that someone has just made a pretty good joke, but it's gone right over your head, and you really have no idea what's going on? -monkeyman

2006-12-17, 12:29 AM	#4
carsonpalooza Registered User Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Representing North Carolina Posts: 807	sure I'll read some, check your pm. __________________ Carson, MR addict Do you ever get the feeling that someone has just made a pretty good joke, but it's gone right over your head, and you really have no idea what's going on? -monkeyman

2006-12-17, 02:25 AM	#5
burjzyntski be norml Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Hobe Sound, Florida (HSL) Age: 24 Posts: 1,731	check your PMs again. __________________ It's no good being Polish unless you prove it once a day. "Every silver lining's got a touch of gray." -Nude & Proud-

2006-12-17, 02:47 AM	#6
podzol "Not I," said the duck. Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Rhizosphere Age: 45 Posts: 1,755	Thanks! Hey folks, Thanks for the interest, keep it coming! I will have the first chapter to you tomorrow. I look forward to your comments! Blake __________________ http://www.frogballsjuggling.com

2006-12-17, 03:16 AM	#7
burjzyntski be norml Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Hobe Sound, Florida (HSL) Age: 24 Posts: 1,731	I look forward to your chapter. __________________ It's no good being Polish unless you prove it once a day. "Every silver lining's got a touch of gray." -Nude & Proud-

2006-12-17, 03:23 AM	#8
tumblebug rollin Registered User Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: S E Arkansas Age: 64 Posts: 133	I think you already have my address in your PM. I'm an omniverous reader. Skills as critic yet to be determined, but would be interested in the project.

2006-12-17, 04:00 AM	#9
habbywall Groovy! Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Michigan Age: 23 Posts: 4,793	Are you gonna PM us back? Or should I just be confident that you got my PM? __________________ Try to learn something about everything and everything about something.

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